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Mr. B
10/9/2016 05:32:27 pm
Shelby, you have been working really hard in class and it shows. Make sure you try to improve your writing with Topic sentences so you can elaborate more on your points. Right now you are not using topic sentences. You need to keep your vocabulary all in one blog and number them.
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